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Vengence shall be mine

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Last night I had a revelation
Somehow I have to make you pay
It's all about manipulation
And what it takes to get my way
I don't believe in soft solutions
No one make a fool of me
Without receiving retribution
No one hurts me and goes free…

I thought about forgiving you, but
I want revenge, I want what's mine
I think it's time to settle scores now
It's time to set the record straight
You'll know it's coming, you won't know how
Or when, you will just have to wait
I made this a few days ago in English class, we were writing horror stories and i came up with this little bit to put into mine. any good?
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I think this shows a lot of emotion. It seems like you've got (or had, since this is pretty old) some pent up frustrations and some hard feelings for someone.

Have you ever tried free form poetry? I found that when I tried to rhyme, it wouldn't work well for me. When I switched to free form it was... liberating. I should see if I can find any of stuff. Hmm.

Anyway, free form might not be for you, but who knows!